Comments on: Atton Rand’s Death

By: Nihilus

Nihilus — Sun, 13 Jan 2008 22:52:13 +0000

It’s excellent. In your spare time, check out my story for Atton.

By: RevanBodyguard

RevanBodyguard — Mon, 17 Dec 2007 10:49:56 +0000

thanks a lot. that means a lot to me. it really does=D XD

By: MaggOnasi

MaggOnasi — Sat, 10 Nov 2007 19:39:59 +0000

Its *sniff* so sad!!

By: therealrevan

therealrevan — Sat, 03 Nov 2007 18:19:03 +0000

that was an amazing story pleas write more i beg of you

By: RevanBodyguard

RevanBodyguard — Wed, 24 Oct 2007 22:12:32 +0000

*blushing* I can’t take all the credit for this. I heard some deleted dialogue cut out of the game and added some of my style on to it with the Exile in it. The whole holy, holey joke from George Weasley of Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows. *bowing thank yous to Lucasarts, Obsidian, and J.K. Rowling* Hope The Sith Lords Restoration Mod can fix up the game as it was meant to be.

By: RevanBodyguard

RevanBodyguard — Wed, 24 Oct 2007 22:03:27 +0000

Hi! I forgot to add something here. In case you’re wondering, no I won’t write about the ending battle with Andria, Sion, and Kreia fighting and eventually dying. I mean, I like good v.s. evil just not with the Jedi Exile dead part. I’m sad enough with Atton’s death tears falling from my face thank very much. Please don’t steal my stories as one of your own, I work hard on this to share on the internet. Share with your friends and other people you know. I have this goal to become a great writer and I need your help. Thanks!

“You may silence the pen, but never the writer!”

By: RevanBodyguard

RevanBodyguard — Wed, 24 Oct 2007 21:41:15 +0000

I was totally crying while writing this story and I still couldn’t stop. I also had nightmares too. I believed I went over dramtic with the details of how depressing this is; this the first time I wrote such a sorrowing story I was testing out that hit me in the gut. Atton Rand is my favorite character but I don’t want him to die. I’m really sorry if this story about Atton dying upsets you too. I just wanted to show Atton’s Light Side redemption, how his relationship with the Jedi Exile affected both him and her, and Andria’s influence with Bao-Dur, Mical the Disciple, and Mira. I was trying to show how truly evil the Dark Side is and how cruel and unforgivable Kreia and Darth Sion are. If you don’t like it, please tell me right away and I’ll take care of it. Please tell me what you think and what you don’t like about: I wouldn’t like to disappoint my readers, it isn’t good, you know! Promise to keep on writing if you keep on commenting! Thanks, I need you guys for this one. If you don’t, I won’t write anymore.

“You may silence the pen, but never the writer!”

By: Starr

Starr — Wed, 24 Oct 2007 17:44:49 +0000

:crying: That was so sad! I’m going to go cry in the corner now. You captured the emotions of this story completely. The detail was perfect and the dialogue great! :crying:

Starr