fan fiction scrollRevans Shadow: Part 8. Visions.

 Bastila ShanCanderous OrdoCarth Onasi

Authors Note: Darth Talion comes into this part. Zii gets scared. You also discover something very important about the story. And I couldn’t decide what genre to pick, Drama or Romance. So I chose other even though this is really Drama/Romance.

You, Zii, HK-47, T3-M4, and Deisa all walk up the ramp of the Ebown Hawk. “So, this is it.” you tell Deisa. “Wow, nice ship!” Deisa compliments you. “Thanks.” you respond. “How fast is it?” Deisa asks. “Well, actually, it’s the fastest ship in the galaxy.” Zii responds for you. “Oh, wow.” Deisa says, surprised. “So, T3, do you want ot do that diagnostic while the rest of us go to sleep?” you ask. “Bee-boo-twee-grr” T3-M4 responds. “Good.” you say.
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“So, Deisa, this will be your room.” you tell Deisa, showing him the room thats in the center of the ship. (The one where Mira and Juhani used). “Thank so much for letting me be with you guys, it means a lot to me.” Deisa says graciously. “Anytime.” you respond. “Well, I better get to sleep.” you tell him. “Of course.” he responds. You walk into the room that you and Zii share (Seperate beds) and Zii asks you, “Who the HELL is he?” “I-I think he’s a Jedi, but he doesn’t seem to like to talk about it.” you respond, choosing your words carefully. “How do you know he’s a Jedi?” Zii asks you. “I saw him with lightsabers.” you respond calmly and cooly. “What color were they?” Zii asks. “Red,” Zii’s face goes pale. “and green.” some color returns to his face. “Okay, so it’s either a Jedi with a red lightsaber, or a Dark Jedi with a green lightsaber.” Zii concludes. “Or, a person who can use the force, has two lightsabers, one green, one red, and is NOT a Jedi or a Dark Jedi.” you re-conclude. “H-H-He can use the force?” Zii whispers. “Umm… Yeah, I saw him stick out his arm and make a Dark Jedi go flying.” you responds. “He killed a Dark Jedi?” Zii asks you. “Yes.” you respond. “Okay, so I guess we can trust him for now.” Zii says. “Good.” you say, lying your head down and going to sleep.

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Darth Talion is running through the halls of the Jedi Temple on Corascaunt. She has killed 3/4 of the people, padwans, knights, masters, and droids in the Temple. The only part of the temple that she hasn’t destroyed is the padwan training section. “This’ll be easy.” Talion thinks to herself. She can’t control her turning to the darkside, but now that she was on the darkside, she LOVED it. The power, the victory, the strength. Her chains are broken. No turning back.
She enters the padwan section of the Temple. “Master Ruth, hello.” a 10 year-old padwan says, bowing infront of Darth Talion. “Perfect position.” Talion says with a smile on her face. “What do you mea-” The padwan dies.

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“Perfect position.” you say, waking up with a bloodthirsty smile on your face. “What?” the voice of Deisa asks. You open your eyes. There’s Deisa standing over you. “Oh um… Nothing.” you respond nervously. “Another vision?” Deisa asks with his eyebrows up. “Umm… Well… Yes.” you repsond. “Come with me.” Deisa says, walking away. “Okay.” you resopnd.
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Zii opens his eyes when you leave the room with Deisa. “Are they-No, they wouldn’t, they just met. And he’s a Jedi.” Zii thinks to himself. “But then, what are they doing?”
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“So, you have visions like your in this, “Talions” eyes?” Deisa asks. “Yes.” you repond. “I see, I heard that Revan had visions like this too.” Deisa says. “I heard that too…” you respond. “What do you know about Revan?” Deisa asks. “Well, I know that she destroyed the ‘Star Forge’ and that she got married to a man called Admiral Onasi.” you respond, not saying that Revans your sister. “Carth Onasi,” Deisa corrects you. “and Revan also had visions of these things called Star Maps that led to the Star Forge.” “Oh, that I didn’t know.” you respond. “I also have the information on who Revan traveled with. Their names were, Carth Onasi, Juhani, Mission Vao, Zallabar, Jolee Bindo, Canderous Ordo renamed ‘Mandalore’, T3-M4, HK-47, and B-B-Bastila Sh-Sh-Shan.” Deisa says ‘Bastila Shan’ like he’s going to cry for a reason that is unknown to you, for now. “How does those people have anything to do with the visions I’m having?” you ask. “They don’t, except for B-Bastila.” he responds, holding back tears. “How does she hove anything to do with me?” you ask. “Well she and Revan, they had a force bond, so they had the same visions and dreams.” Deisa responds. “So, your saying, that I might have a force bond with someone who will come with us?” you ask. “Yes, maybe even a person who’s on this ship right now.” Deisa responds. “Zii? No, he couldn’t have a for-” you cut off. “Wait, are you saying that I can use the force?” you ask nervously. “Yes, you can.” Deisa whispers. “And so, you and I have a force bond?” you ask. “Yes.” Deisa whispers again. “This is really overwhelming.” you say out loud while falling onto the bed and stuffing your head into the pillow. “I know, but the reason I told you is because, I had the same vision as you.” Deisa says. “WHAT!” you shout. “Not so loud.” Deisa says calmly. “Well, isn’t she scary?” you ask Deisa. “Yes, she is. But she has a weakness, like everbody else.” Deisa explains. “What? What’s her weakness?” you ask curiously. “Power.” Deisa says simply. “Power?” you repeat as a question. “Power.” Deisa says again. “How can power be a weakness?” you ask. “I know all about power…” Deisa says so quietly that you can’t hear him. “Oh, about the power being a weakness, power can become out of control. You can use it in a way where you think you’re using it against someone, but you are actually using it against yourself.” Deisa explains. “Like…” you ask. “Umm… Say you are a Sith who has power. You are also a fallen Jedi who turned to the darkside. You decide to launch an attack on the home planet of your old Jedi Master, you’re expecting a good feeling, but all you get at the end of the attack is pain and sorrow.” Deisa explains. “Oh, I kind of get it.” you say. “Good, why don’t we get some sleep.” Deisa reponds. “Okay.” you say, agreeing.
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When you left your room to go into Deisa’s, Zii tiptoed to the video room. (I forgot which room that’s called). Zii looked into the camra that showed Deisa’s room. It showed Jessica going into Deisa’s room. They both sit down on the bed. Then they just, talk. “About what?” Zii wonders. Suddenly, Jessicas jaw drops. She then smashes her face into the pillow. Zii raises his eyebrows. “What was THAT about?” he wonders again. Jessica gets up. “Uh-oh.” Zii thinks to himself. He tip-toes back into his and Jessicas room. As soon as he starts fake-sleeping, Jessica walks in. He suddenly feels lips touching his cheek. “She thinks I’m asleep.” Zii thinks to himself. “Does she do this every night? If she does, I’ll stay up!!!”
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When you walk back to you and Zii’s room, Zii’s sleeping. You suddenly notice how handsome he is. “I’ve been on this ship with him for 5 months and I haven’t even asked him out.” you think to yourself. You don’t even notice that your bodies moving towards him, bending down and kissing him on the cheek. You then bend back up, and walk back to your bed.

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4 Responses to “Revans Shadow: Part 8. Visions.”

  1. Darth Shiin says:

    Sorry for all the grammar and spelling mistakes. The time when I said ouy is really you and bends is bend and her is your.

  2. MaggOnasi says:

    I read this yesterday,but for some strange reason, I couldn’t comment

    I like the ending =Dcant wait to see what happens next

  3. Darth Shiin says:

    Thanks.

  4. whoa, keep them coming man! i’m loving it!

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