fan fiction scrollThe Sound of Revenge Chapter 35

 Atton RandCarth OnasiExile (Female/Light Side)

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Notes:  Awww, RevanBodyguard already left =(Oh well.  I can live for a week.  Listening to My Immortal by Evanescence, Young Blood Spills Tonight by Eyes Set To Kill, and Silent Lucidity by Queensryche.  All three emo songs, lol.   Here’s a video about the Exile and Atton you might probably like =D http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a3oAIbAlsF4  (and sis, I wrote this.. like… right after I called you)  Then I started singing a Fuel song called Hemorrhage (in my hands)… it sucked (my singing of course)


 

The Sound of Revenge

Chapter 35

Good Aim

“Hey dad, you wouldn’t mind if I left and spent time with Aiedail?  I need to get away from all this work.”  Hunter said wiping his dirty hands with a worn out cloth.

“Well Hunt, the damage on the Hawk was your fault.”  Carth replied.

“So… can I go?”  Hunter asked.

“Well I’m being abased in my position of Admiral.  More or less of my age.”

 “I care why?”

“I’m getting old, Hunt.  I can’t do everything I did before.  I’m getting weaker and I would appreciate your help.”

“ I’m getting older too… and I’m single.”

“Thanks’ zero… that’s no thanks.  Also, for trying to leave me, I’ll give you another job.  The paint on the Hawk is abrasion.  Mind repainting it?”  Carth said giving Hunter a smirk.

“Yes, I do mind.”  Hunter snapped.

“Well too bad, you’re doing it!”  Carth scowled.  “You’re abstained here until Hawk gets another coat on her.”

“But dad.”

“No buts!  I want you to paint her.”

Carth and Hunter, at first, argued about Hunter not being free enough to do what he wishes, but in the end, Hunter acceded and said, “You’re unbelievable.”

“I’m a dad.”  Carth said.
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Soon after the Hawk was burnished, Hunter bustled away from the hanger where the Hawk stayed, and down to where Aiedail lived.  Hunter knocked on the door and Andria opened it. 

“Good morning, Hunter.”  Andria said sadly.

“I anything wrong?”

“Aiedail isn’t feeling well.  Actually, she hasn’t been feeling well for awhile.  Its deteriorating.”

“Can I talk to her?” 

“Go ahead.”  Andria said moving out of Hunters way.

“Thank you.”  Hunter said to her as he made his way down to Aiedail’s room.

“Hey, Hunt.”  Aiedail’s weak, raspy voice greated him.

 ”Hey, Aiedail.”  Hunter said walking in and sitting by her side.  “Your mom told me that you aren’t feeling good.”

“I’m not.”  Aiedail replied sitting up on her bed.  “So- why’d you come?”

“I came to see you of course!”

 Aiedail laughed weakly.  “So thats why.  Do you know how to shoot a blaster?”

“Um… yeah…but…”

“Can you teach me?”  Aiedail quickly jumped in.

“Sure… I guess… If Andria would allow it.”  Hunter said approval.

“Can you please ask her for me.”

“Well… can’t you ask her?  You can walk… and talk…”

“I hurts to stand.”  Aiedail moaned.

Hunter looked at her helplessly.  “Fine.  I’ll ask her for you.”

Hunter walked out of Aiedail’s room with a strange feeling like someone was watching him each step.  (foreshadowing baby!)

Hunter walked into Andria’s room.  “Hey, Andria.”  He said to her.  She was sitting on her bed with her hands on her stomach stairing at the ceiling.

“Anything you need?”  Andria asked not daring to look at him.

“Is something wrong?”  Hunter asked couriously.

“No.  Is there anything you need?”  Andria asked again.

“Aiedail wants to go shooting with me.”

“Does she?  Well then, go right ahead.”

“Really?  Thanks.”

“Don’t metion it.”

Hunter made his way back to Aiedail’s room  “What did she say?”  Aiedail asked when Hunter walked in.

“She said yes… but she’s acting a bit strange.”

“She’s always strange.  Please help me up.”

Hunter slipped his arm under her back and helped her get her feet over the edge.

Aiedail could walk most of the way, but sometimes she would stop and either lean against the walls or sit down.

When Aiedail and Hunter made it to the shooting center, they found only a few spaces left to shoot at.  They took the closest one to the door.

“Here, you hold the gun like this.”  Hunter said demontraiting how to hold the blaster.  He handed her the blaster, and with his other hand, he took hers and wrapped it around the gun.  “And then, pull the trigger.”

“So, what am I aiming for?”  Aiedail asked.

“You see way back there?”  Hunter said pointing to a large red circle way in the back.  “Aim at that.”

“Okay.”  It didn’t take her much time to aim then pull the trigger.

Hunter had to squint to see if she had it it, strange enough, she did.

“Nice aim… Aiedail…”  Hunter said with a nod of satisfaction.  “Lets try that again… to make sure it wasn’t luck.”

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3 Responses to “The Sound of Revenge Chapter 35”

  1. Shiin says:

    lovey dovey me lovey!!!!!!!

  2. Shiin says:

    uh, anyone there?

  3. Shiin says:

    ANYONE THERE!!!!

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