fan fiction scrollThe Sound of Revenge Chapter 3

 Atton RandCarth OnasiExile (Female/Light Side)

Notes:
Drasi, Onasi!! See the rezemblance? Sorry it took so long to get these up =P School is finally out so I can get back on track and put up the stories=D

The Sound of Revenge…
Chapter 3
Here by me…

“Oh my gosh, Revan!” Andria squeled jumping up and hugging Revan

“Andria! Where have you been? How has it been?”

“Me and Atton moved to Drasi, you know, that really green, grassy area?”

“Yeah. I wanted to go there for me and Carths honey moon.”

“I see.”

“Mommy! Your friend mind-tricked me!” Hunter cried.

Revan shot Andria a look. She held her hands up.

“Hey, hey, I just wanted to make sure I was at the right place.”

“What did he tell you?”

“Can I trick him again so he will repeat it?”

“No.”

“It will sound cuter.”

“Okay, fine!”

Andria smiled sweetly at Hunter.

“Can you repeat everthing you said before?”

“My name is Hunter, Dustil here, this is my step brother. I’m trying. See, he thinks your a muderer, and hes affraid he might become one himself . Because your apart of somthing all terrible and I hope the hell that he’s wrong but i’m starting to get a little scared hes right.”

“Why did he say ‘Im trying’?”

“Because Dustil told me to shut up!” Hunter said pointing a finger at Dustil.

“Did not!” Dustil yelled.

“Dustil, tell the truth!” Andria said using her mind trick.

“Yes I did.”

“Dustil!” Revan cried.

“What?! Psycho here mind tricked me!”

“Did you just call me psycho?!” Andria shreaked.

“Dustil! Thats no way to talk to guest!” Revan snapped.

“Don’t tell me what to do!”

“Get used to it sonny, you’ll be getting that alot now!”

“Your not my mom!”

“So what?”

“So quit acting like you are!” Dustil said storming out of the room.

“So, wheres Atton and Aiedail?” Revan asked turning back to Andria.

“Their on the ship, asleep.”

“Nice to know.”

“Yep.”

*******

“Aiedail, hurry up before your father eats your breakfast!” Andria called to Aiedail who was in the refreasher.

“Well…. um…..”

“Your father ate your breakfast.”

“You didn’t have to tell her!”

“Well, when she comes here and ask where her breakfast is, im gonna say that you ate it and guess who shes going to beat?”

“Me?”

“Very good Atton!” Andria said flipping the page of the ‘Whats New’ paper that goes around to everyone. “Look here, Revan and Carth got front page.”

“Front page of what?”

“Murder….. MURDER?!”

“They murderd someone, again?”

Andrias hands shook almost dropping the paper. Atton scooted closer to see.

“Who’d they murder?”

“I don’t think ‘they’ murdererd anyone.”

“T-o….t-u…..”

“Its pronunced ‘the’.”

“Who was murdererd?”

“Some mercinary.”

“I bet that the person murderd was trying to steal Revan because she is hot…..”

Andria gave him her ‘not amused’ look.

“Well, I think that the mercinary was trying to hurt them so they used self deffence. No, I think Dustil murderd him.”

“Dustil murderd himself?! He was so young!” Atton cried.

“Dustil wasn’t murderd dumbass!”

“Well sorry!”

“Revan was acused for it and really, Dustil killt him. Interesting….”

“OR, or, the mercinary killed himself to make it look like Revan did that.”

“There is MANY things wrong with that. First, why the hell would someone do that?”

“They had a dept to pay off.”

“Second…” Andria continued ignoring Atton. “They found blood on Revans hands.”

“How do you know this??”

“Its on the front page smartness!”

“Why, thank you.”

“It wasn’t a complement!”

“Well, it is to me!”

“Sure it is sweetie!” Andria said is sarcasim.

*******

“Now, what the hell, this whole damned thing is a set up!” Revan cursed pacing her room.

“We all know your inisant Rev, don’t worry.” Carth said trying to calm her down.

“You tell ME to not worry when i’m about to be sentanced to death?!”

“Your not going to be sentanced to death! It was pretty funny on Manan when you lied.”

“Well, this is differnt! I can’t lie in this! They think I murderd someone.”

“On Manan you murderd countless of sith, but you still lie. Besides, you don’t need to lie.”

“But I did kill him.”

“In self deffence. Besides, Dustil was there! He saw the entire thing. He’ll explain what happend.”

“And, if he lies.”

“Your screwed.”

“Thanks for the support.”

“Your welcome, Beautiful. But don’t worry, Dustil won’t lie.”

“You’ll get a little more than expected.” Revan mumbled to herself.

“Huh?”

“Nothing.”

*******

“We are going even if I have to carry you!” Andria yelled trying to pull Atton out the door.

“No! I don’t want to go!” Atton said pulling away from her as hard as he can.

“You are coming!”

“No i’m not!”

“Fine.” Andria said letting go.

He flew into the wall with a loud ‘thud’.

“But sweetie, learn to sleep with your eyes open.” Andria said shutting the door.

“Wait! I’ll come!” Atton said swinging the door open.

“Glad you decided to come.” Andria said standing right infront of the door.

*******

“Why am I in a cage?” Revan asked.

“Because you murderd someone.”

“I did it in self deffence!” She cried. “And your my lawyer.” She said crossing her arms.

“Glad you like me. So what were you doing when the suspect walked in? Or were you holding him captive?”

“I was eating.”

“I wonder why. So he wasn’t a hostage?”

“No.”

“Okay. Did anyone witness the murder?”

“Yes.”

“Who?”

“My step-son.”

“His name is?”

“Dustil Onasi.”

“Okay. I think your guilty.”

“Am not!”

“I was joking.”

“I want someone else to represent me!”

“Why?”

“Because you might mess up and get me killed!”

“Listen honey, its me or yourself…”

“I choose me!”

“Take that back!”

“No! I’m representing myself!”

“Okay, but don’t come crying to me when they burn your ass.”

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2 Responses to “The Sound of Revenge Chapter 3”

  1. RevanBodyguard says:

    Love it! = D
    interesting, your stories do not suck

  2. Darth_Cyvan says:

    this so good i can’t stop reading your fics

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