Notes: Listening to Tatoo by Jordin Sparks, Where’d you go by Fort Minor Â
The Sound of Revenge
Chapter 23
Rotiart
Hunter took the Ebon Hawk with him. Before he left, his father gave him the Ebon Hawk, so she went every where with him.
“This Hawk runs like it has the bladder of a gizka. Oh… he he, we’re almost out of fuel sweetheart. Could have told me.”
Hunter set the next stop on Naboo.
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After he landed at got the Hawk full and ready, he stopped at the cantina to grab a drink.
“Arn’t you a bit too young to be drinking?” Some drunk guy asked Hunter as Hunter orderd one of the drinks listed.
“Um, no.”
“Jest makin sure. We’d ont want anoyone dronk.”
“Um… sure.”
Instead of staying, Hunter left the bar knowing he shouldn’t start drinking.
As Hunter headed back to the Ebon Hawk, he senced someone following him. Hunter stopped every few feet, then continued. After awhile he didn’t sence anyone or anything untill he reached the Ebon Hawk.
Hunter headed to the cock pit and found someone sitting in the chair.
“Who are you?!” Hunter hesitated.
“My name is Rotiart. I’m a jedi.”
“Oh, your mom must be so proud.”
“I hear you quit the order to find some girl who has been missing for 10 years, and got Zoey kicked out.”
“I didn’t quit.”
“Yeah, but you’re sure as hell going to be kicked out.”
“Shut up! Why did you come?”
“Thought some little kid like you would need some help.”
“I’m not a little kid, Rotiart! We’re the same age smartass.”
“Who taught you that one?”
“Just explain what your doing here.”
“I am stalking you.”
“Be serious!”
“I was serious before… to help you find Aiedail.”
“How do you know Aiedail?”
“Why do you want to know? Just accept my offer in letting me help you find Aiedail and I won’t be annoying.”
“You were born annoying, Rotiart. That’s why your name is Retard exept with an accent.”
“I’ll take that as a yes.”
“I don’t trust you.”
“Who does? Please, can I come along?”
“Since you said please… fine! But if you mess up…”
“You’re going to kill me even though you’re already dead. Gotcha.”
“But get out of the pilots seat. I’m the only one flying this.”
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Rotiart=traitor spelled backwards. Oops…did I just type that out loud? :O
Nice work on this, though. Hunter seems…a bit arrogant.
nice job! Hunter has trust issues doesn’t he?
Spelled Retard except with a accent- that cracked me up
Rotiart=traitor spelled backwards… i didn’t notice that. thanks alot for spilling the beans, Nihilus!
keep up the good work!
Thank you
And thank you for spoiling it
It doesn’t Rotiart is bad… just misunderstood
Oh, and sis, theres a REALLY good chance I’m leaving youtube =(
Aww…. I liked your YouTube stuff. . . except Carth and Atton are way too sexy… that was kind of disgusting.
I liked the story… hehe… retards.