fan fiction scrollAtton’s Final Flight

 Atton RandBastila ShanCarth Onasi

Author’s Notes: First off, DO NOT MASS-COMMENT STORIES, Shiin. I appreciate you have creative criticism, but too much isn’t neccessary. Carrying on, this is the last story in this series. After this, I’ll continue with my KOTOR backstories. Then, I’ll go on to something else. Continue on.

Jolee saw, when the light faded, a child, not much older than seven. Jolee felt quite puzzled. “Well, well, well. Who are you, youngster?” he asked. The child walked closer to him. It was revealed to Jolee that it was a girl. The girl spoke to him. “He has come for Atton. He wishes to kill Atton. Keep Atton safe. Please…keep my brother safe.” With that, she faded away, leaving Jolee completely bewildered. He immediately ran into the house. “ATTON!” he shouted, waking EVERYONE up. Atton bolted out of his bed, however. “What the hell is it, old dude?” a tense Atton asked Jolee. “Well, it seems I just met your sister.” Atton’s face drained of color. “But…Ariel was killed when she was seven! How could you have met her? Plus, she died on NAR SHADDAA, not Telos. It’s…impossible. Haha, yeah. That’s it. I’m just dreaming. Jolee swatted Atton upside the head. “I’m afraid you’re not dreaming, sonny. She told me to keep you safe. For some reason unkown.” Atton looked at Norris. “I think you should believe him. He’s one to crack a joke, but he’s not one to lie.”

Atton chose to believe Jolee. Suddenly, T3 got a transmission from Stryker. The entire group stared at the hologram of the ten-year-old boy. “Hello, father. I have come here to kill you, as I did in my time. You WILL NEVER harm Mother! NEVER! If you accept the challenge I am about to put forward, no one else is to accompany you. You will come alone, or your companions, excluding Mother, will be destroyed. The challenge is abve Nar Shaddaa, in the Secret Star Forge. I look forward to slaying you again!” The transmission cut off there. Everyone was silent. They were all looking at Atton. “Atton, that was Stryker! THAT WAS STRYKER!” Norris told him frantically. “I know, I know…” Atton contemplated what to do. He thought long and hard about it. He reached a decision. “I’m gonna go. I have to. Otherwise, you guys’ll be killed.” He shed a single tear. Norris’s lip quivered. She broke down crying. “I don’t want you to go!” she said in between sobs. “I have to…I’m sorry.” He gave Norris a big hug, the biggest hug he had ever given her in their time together. He gave her a final kiss. It was the longest kiss he had ever given her. When they stopped, he got to his feet. Mustering all of his courage, he made an announcement: “My friends, I can’t believe I’m about to do this. I don’t want to, but it has to be done. I will miss you all. Goodbye.” He went outside and fired up the Ebon Hawk. T3 went, too. “T3, once I get into the Star Forge, I want you to leave it behind. Bring the Hawk back here. I don’t wanna be responsible if you get destroyed if the Star Forge is blown up.” T3 beeped solemnly and understandingly.

The Ebon Hawk took off. Three days later, it returned. Everybody had at least half-expected to see Atton still alive. Unfortunately, only T3 came down the loading ramp. He had recorded the entire fight. It ended with Atton killing Stryker, but Stryker had initiated the self-destruct sequence. Atton’s last words to everyone were: “I hope T3 makes it out of here in one piece to show you this. I had to stay behind to try and stall the self-destruct sequence because at this point, it was past the point of deactivation. The most I could do was stall it so that T3 could get out. I’m probably dead right now. *laughs* I hope you guys remember me. I love you, Norris. I really do.” The recording ended. The entire group was speechless. Norris was crying hysterically. Mission patted her back. “It’s ok, Norris. He did it to keep us all safe. I, myself, hope that he somehow got off that thing before it blew up. It might be wishful thinking, but that never hurt anyone.” Norris smiled up at Mission. They all stared up at the sky that day, hoping that their cocky flyboy would return.

YOU HAVE FINISHED THIS SERIES. I HOPE YOU HAVE ENJOYED IT.

As I stated before, I will now continue and hopefully finish my KOTOR backstories.

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23 Responses to “Atton’s Final Flight”

  1. MaggOnasi says:

    I hate it when the greatest things end =P
    good series

  2. MaggOnasi says:

    So, Atton’s dead?

  3. Nihilus says:

    Well…
    IDK yet…
    I’m thinking of a couple possible ideas for a new series.

  4. Darth Shiin says:

    So how long until the next series?

  5. Darth Shiin says:

    Mass Commentate

  6. Darth Shiin says:

    Mass Commentate Again

  7. Darth Shiin says:

    *Mocking voice* Nihilus stop mass commentating my stories MA AMA AMAMA

  8. Darth Shiin says:

    Guys, read my reunited Kotor 2 cast, it’s actually really good in my opinion.

    Uh, not to toot my own horn but… TOOT TOOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  9. Darth Soran says:

    i think atton should die. he doesn’t have much of a life except getting drunk and playing pazaak.

  10. Darth Soran says:

    if you ask me.

  11. Darth Shiin says:

    What did I tell you???

    RevanBodygaurd is going to kill you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  12. MaggOnasi says:

    Why? Because it said Atton should die… yeah, you’re dead =P The things us girls do…

  13. Darth Shiin says:

    Hehehheehehehehe, girls do crazy things, like last night… wow…

    *cough* brittny spears *cough*

  14. Darth Shiin says:

    She just… BAM!!!!!!!!

    And it was in…

    hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha, that was the most disgusting joke I have ever made!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  15. Darth Shiin says:

    Soran, I changed it from Shaliea to Aria.

  16. Darth Shiin says:

    Aria, ONASI

  17. Darth Soran says:

    well it just seems like he has no life

  18. Darth Soran says:

    he spends most of it in jail anyway

  19. Darth Soran says:

    probably hiding from his x-girlfriend

  20. oh, i’m going to kill the guy who said Atton should die!!! oh well, can’t touch him anyway… =P

    so it looks like Atton died to protect others. that doesn’t quite sound like him before it’s all for himself. wow, his kid got problems. what did Atton do that was so horrible to make Stryker want to kill him? i wonder if he did actually die… as always, i enjoyed the series!

  21. Nihilus says:

    Hmmm…
    You’ll see after I complete some more of my backstories.

  22. Darth Shiin says:

    RevanBodygaurd: You mean Soran???

    Without them my series would die.

  23. yeah, that guy, Soran. i’m kidding, okay?
    no hard feelings =P

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