the dark ending
“well well revan you are stronger than i thought in fact you are stronger than before” mallak mutterd “bow down before the true sith lord mallak and i might be merciful” revan said mallak drew out his sleek red saber and got ready for the confrontation revan grabed her double bladed light saber and prepered then revan slashed his saber and lost her balance while malak was going to execute her she used force stasis on malak malak shouted i will not lose the mantle of dark lord and in his rage broke out of stasis then revan used force lighting malak was weak he quickly used force drain on a captive jedi “whats that for malak” she said “ah you underestimate the power of the starforge all you saw was a factory but its like a living beind it feeds on the dark side within all of us hahaha i am invincible here hahaha”
revan had an ideashe unleshed force lighting on the whole room she felt power evrywhere in her body it was the greatest sensation of her life then she felt it her body was slowly growing stronger malak was looking in dismay at revans growing power “huh no this is my power no!” malak shreiked then revan smiled “no malak i found the first starmap on dantoine its my power” then mallak ran towards revan striking her with a blow from his saberrevan smirked “that wont work” then she striked malak in the face with her saber arrgh he cried then revan drained his power malak tortured and dying beged to be killed so revan ended his life by more force lighting
to be continued
i am very proud of my story im going to do the exile and darth traya s comfortaion next
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