fan fiction scrollThe Sound of Revenge Chapter 21

 Star Wars

Notes: Listening to Natalie Imbruglia’s Torn, Goo Goo Doll’s Iris, Donna Lewis’s Love You Always Forever, Savage Garden’s Truly, Madly, Deeply, Green River Ordinance’s Come On (radio edit). I promise I’ll try to make these a bit longer!!

The Sound of Revenge

Chapter 21

Discovery

 

“Hey Jade, wheres Hunter?” Zoey said stopping Jade in the hallway.

“I don’t know. Probably leaving training.”

“Do you know where he’s training today?”

“Um… no, I don’t.”

“Ughh.” Zoey groaned before running off to find Hunter.

~*

Hunter just left training on the training grounds just outside the temple.

Hunter walked back to the lounge where most people stay after training. He found Jade lounging on one of the long couches.

“Hey Jade.” Hunter said planting himself on the couch across from her.

“Hey Hunter. Zoey was looking for you. She want’s to tell you something that the jedi council is is hiding.”

“Did she tell you first?”

“If she did tell me, you think I wouldn’t tell you?”

“Where is she?”

“Out looking for you.”

“Where?”

“Where ever she thinks you are.”

~*

Zoey walked up and down each corridor trying to find Hunter.

“Dammit Hunter! Where are you?” Zoey cursed to herself

“Looking for me?”

Zoey turned around and Hunter was standing there.

“Hunter!” Zoey cried. “I need to tell you something.”

Zoey looked both ways and then pulled Hunter over to a bench. The both sat down.

“I was on Malacore V with Aiedail.”

“You know Aiedail?”

“Yea. She isn’t as pleasant as she looks. Anyways, if I’m still alive, Aiedail should be alive too!”

“So you don’t know if she’s alive or not?”

“Someone took her away and left me. I told the Jedi Council and they refuse to tell you, and they threatend to banish me from the Council if I told you.”

“So why are you telling me?”

“You have to help her.”

“Why would the council banish you?”

“Theres a war coming, they all know that. They say if you left, then no one would be there to lead the army. You would be too late to fight in the war.” Zoey leaned into Hunter and whisperd,” You’re going to die.”

“How do they know I’m going to die? They’re not as high and mighty as they seem to be. They can’t tell me if I die or not!”

“Who knows. They can be right at some points.”

“This is something they’re not right on!”

“Are you going to find Aiedail?”

“Yes! I am! I have to go tell Andria and Atton that Aiedail is still alive.”

“Who are they?”

“He parents, who else?”

Before Zoey could say anything else, Hunter dashed off.

~*

Hunter sent a transmittion to Andria and Atton saying:

Aiedail is still alive, and I’m going out to find her. Please don’t tell dad I’m doing this. Zoey Demaro sacrificed her Jedi life to tell me.Hunter.

~

 

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12 Responses to “The Sound of Revenge Chapter 21”

  1. Darth Shiin says:

    Wow… I like it… Kinda sad… Cool… =O

  2. whooo! boy, you write pretty fast Arice! =0
    gotta know what happens next!
    umm, how you been watching Terminater movies? i don’t know but this story seems familar to me… =)

  3. Darth Shiin says:

    MaggOnasi, I like your YouTube stuff, it’s cool.

  4. MaggOnasi says:

    Haha, thx Darth Shiin!

    And yeah, I do… but I already finished writing da series..

  5. Darth Shiin says:

    Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet

  6. MaggOnasi says:

    January 12 already???? Guess thats what coco do to ya

  7. Darth Shiin says:

    It depends what coast your on.
    Cocoa is the right word.

    WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH ME?!?!?!

  8. MaggOnasi says:

    Well to answer ‘what the hell is wrong with me’, everything
    And I live in the Eastern coast in Us

  9. Darth Shiin says:

    Shut Up!!!!!!
    I’m not the one who makes all those spelling and grammar errors!!!!!!!
    But, I’m not one to keep a grudge on someone.

  10. MaggOnasi says:

    Hehe, do I make your blood boil?

  11. Darth Shiin says:

    Not really, if you mean you scare me, no, you don’t.
    I just ment I don’t keep grudges. =D

  12. MaggOnasi says:

    Ooooo…….
    Hi
    mi name iz Ariel goood two meat u

    XD XD Had to do that XD

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